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Without a Home
By Christian Olsen


Far, far, away, on the African savannah, where the gentle blue sky touches the steadfast ground, an elephant calf is born. Little elephant, blind at first, feels his way about with his trunk. He feels mothers, brothers, sisters, and cousins. His family. Because newborns are not born with tusks, he is defenseless. He is safe. He has a home. Though he might not have one later....

That night, on the African savannah, where the gentle, now purple sky touches the steadfast ground, something vile is creeping around the elephant herd, unseen and unnoticed. The poacher, hiding in the bushes, sees Mother elephant, her great tusks as soft as silk in the moonlight. He knows that the ivory will get him piles of money, to be made into pills, carvings, or billiard balls. With a gap toothed grin, he takes aim, and FIRES! A noise like a thousand rhinos charging thunders through the herd. The night is peaceful no more. The elephants, startled by the noise, tear off into the distance. But not Little elephant and Mother. Mother lies dead, the cruel poacher throwing down his illegal rifle, and coming toward her prone form, ready to relieve her of her tusks. Inside Little elephant, an ancient instinct tells him to run and hide. And he does just that. He has no home anymore. He is not safe in the cruel, once kind African savannah.

Little elephant is lost! After running blindly through the tall grass, away from the poacher, away from his old life, he laid down and slept. Nightmares chased him throughout the corridors of his mind, and woke him up with a start. When he awoke, he could see! Just a little, though. But it wasn't any use. Without Mother elephant to teach and guide him, he doesn't know how to eat or drink. He decides to look for his herd, and he wanders off into the distance, into the unknown.

After days of walking, little elephant is starving, tired as a sleeping puppy, and dying of thirst. As he plods on, he notices something in the shimmering, dusty distance. His excitement fuels his weak body on, as if he was on rocket power. Excitedly, he hurries forward to intercept it on its path from one distant place to another. It's a giant, black strip of asphalt, cutting Little Elephant's path in two. Of course, he is not running for the black stripe itself; elephants, particularly young elephants, don't know what roads are. Little elephant is running for an 18-wheeler parked on the side. For him, it is his mother, waiting for him. As he reaches it, he feels an immense tiredness weighing down on top of him. He makes it under the bottom of the hulking monolith, then collapses from exhaustion.

Hours later, Little elephant wakes up, surrounded by lots of tall creatures, with long arms and strange clothing. He tries to defend himself, but stumbles on a rock and falls to the unforgiving ground. In a flurry of movement, the strange beings pick up Little elephant and gently place him into a humongous box on wheels, made of a strangely hard material. One of the creatures whispers into his large ear, "It's okay, little Zuri, you're going home." From that moment on, Little elephant knows that his name is Zuri, which is "good" in Swahili. And he now knows that these creatures will not harm him. The metal box suddenly starts to move forward, at an alarming speed. "What's going on", Zuri wonders. Inside the cube-shaped structure, a clear tube filled with plasma is punched into Zuri's front leg, and he squeals in pain, and blacks out yet again.

When he wakes up, Zuri is on a huge plain, surrounded by tall metal fences. Gently rolling hills and a crystal-blue watering hole shimmer in the distance, with, oh the joy! Other elephants around it! Mother elephants and their calves stand and play in the water. One of the Mother elephants hears Zuri with her sensitive ears, and bellows at him. Mother elephants will adopt orphaned elephants, and this mother has done just that. Now, Zuri knows that his life is back on track; he has a name and a herd. And most importantly, he is safe. He has a home. Trumpeting joyously, Zuri runs down the hill to join his new family and his new life.

"Without a Home" By Christian Olsen | StoryMakers 2012 | Rocky Mountain PBS
StoryMakers 2012

2012 StoryMakers Winners and Finalists

The 2012 Winners and Finalists are:

6th Grade
1st - Christian Olsen, "Without A Home" - Littleton, Goddard Middle School
2nd - Lydia MacRavey, "Little Bear's Arrow" - Centennial, Home Schooled
3rd - Elizabeth Blackmun, "Lady of the Lake" - Denver, Denver School of the Arts

Finalists
Chloe Applegate, "Rainin's River" - Denver, Denver School of the Arts
Ella Beringer, "The Chase" - Castle Rock, Soaring Hawk
Ashlyn Kofford, "The Life Necklace" - Longmont, Westview Middle School
Drew Sims, "A Little Help" - La Junta, La Junta Intermediate School
William Underhill, "Bernard" - Denver, Denver School of the Arts


7th Grade
1st - Annie Lell, "Blue Moon" - Arvada, Oberon Middle School
2nd - Mia Nelson, "Deaf Prayers"
 - Denver, Denver School of the Arts
3rd - Jake Daniel, "Through the Eyes of a Golf Ball"
 - Grand Junction, Holy Family Catholic School

Finalists

Nash Marez, "Adventure to Milkdud" - Grand Junction, Holy Family Catholic School 
Gillian Palazzini, 
"Through the Eyes of the Insane" - Merino, Home Schooled 
Clarice Reiner, 
"The Song of a Second" - Arvada, Oberon Middle School 
Britney Sarazen, "
Bullied to Bully" - Fort Lupton, Quest Academy 
Sydney Taylor,
 "Xanthe Soto, Girl Genius: Wind Power" - Denver, Homeschooled


8th Grade
1st - Erin Mallory, "Tricking the Sheep" - Windsor, Saint Joseph's Catholic School
2nd - McKinley Mueller, "Seven Days 'Til Heaven" - Ridgway, Ridgway Secondary School
3rd - Sydney Lewark, "Flying" - Denver, Denver Waldorf School

Finalists
Kinsey Brashears, "Elena Smith" - Fort Morgan, Fort Morgan Middle School
Torryn Elliot
, "The Adventures of Cedric" - Granby, East Grand Middle School
Abigail Weeks
, "Simplicity" - Centennial, West Middle School
Claire Wineman
, "The Conversion" - Denver, Denver School of the Arts
Margaux Woellner
, "The Maligned Hedgehog" - Englewood, West Middle School


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